第一节
小作文：建议信
PART ONE
Directions:
Some international students are coming to your
university. Write them an email in the name of the Students'
Union to
第一段：自我介绍+写作目的
亲爱的朋友们：
我谨代表北京外国语大学学生会，向来我校学习的留学生表示衷心的欢迎。
Dear Friends,
On behalf of the Students’ Union of Beijing Foreign Studies University, I
would like to extend our heartfelt welcome to all the overseas students who will
study in our university.
第二段：第一句：主题句：建议信万能句型
我很荣幸能给你们提一些实用的建议。
It is my great pleasure to offer you several practical suggestions.
第二句：分论点一
首先，这所知名学府的生活也许并不像你们所设想的那么轻松。
In the first place, life in this prestigious university is perhaps not as easy as you have
expected.
第三句：分论点一
你们可能会面临每日的课程、大量的作业和频繁的考试。
You may be tightly bound by daily classes, abundant homework and frequent exams.
第四句：分论点一
因此，做好准备迎接这里的繁忙生活吧。
Thus, be prepared for the hectic life here.
第五句：分论点二
其次，尽管有以上负担，运动会、演讲比赛以及联谊会等各种各样的课外活动仍会提供大量结交朋
友的机会。
In the second place, in spite of all those burdens, various extracurricular activities such
as sports meets, speech contests and social gatherings will still provide ample
opportunities to make friends.
第六句：分论点二
所以，尽情享受这所著名大学里的生活吧。
So, enjoy your life in this esteemed institute!
第三段：小结
总之，尽管有很多压力，但你在这所校园里度过的时光将意义非凡，并为你的整个人生增
添光彩。希望你们喜欢这里！
您真诚的，
李明
All in all, although there is a lot of pressure, the time you spend on our campus will
be worthwhile and enhance your whole life. Hope you like it here! (148 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
大作文：人生哲理
PART TWO
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.
In your essay, you should
2012年英语（一）：
2019年英语（一）：
2021年英语（一）：
第一段：图画描述
第一句：这幅漫画生动描述了足球场上的一名前锋正准备将球射入
守门员把守的球门。（总体描述）
It is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon that a striker is
preparing to shoot at the goal defended by a goalkeeper on a
football field.
第二句：在守门员看来，比起实际的身材自己渺小很多，以至于守
门变成一项不可能完成的任务。（细节描述：守门员）
In the goalkeeper’s mind, he is so much smaller than he
actually is that guarding the goal becomes an impossible
mission.
第三句：与此同时，在那名前锋眼里，这位巨人守门员几乎占据了
整个球门。（细节描述：射手）
At the same time, the giant guard seems to fill up the whole
goal in the attacking player’s mind.
第二段：意义阐释
第一句：主题句（图画象征寓意/全文中心思想）：
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在看似不可克服的挑战与困境面前，最
重要的是拥有自信。
The purpose of the drawing is to show us that in the face of
seemingly insurmountable challenges or predicaments,
possessing self-confidence is of the utmost significance.
第二句：反面论证
无论一个人在学校或工作中曾经如何成功，总有一天他或她会遭遇
难题。
Regardless of how much success one has had in school or at
work, there are bound to be times when he or she will
encounter problems.
第三句：正面论证
关键时刻，正是他对困难和人生的自信决定他能否反败为胜。
It is at these critical times that one’s self-confidence,
toward difficulty and toward life in general, plays a crucial
role in determining whether he or she can turn failure into
victory.
第三段：举例论证
第一句：主题句
没有什么比下面的例子更有说服力。
I can think of no better illustration than the following one.
第二句：举例
海伦·凯勒天生聋且失明，没什么可以让她自信。
Helen Keller was deaf and blind, certainly nothing to give her
self-confidence.
第三句：举例
但她不断克服多种障碍，最终成为一名作家和教师，成为世人的楷
模。
Nevertheless, she went on to conquer her multiple handicaps
to finally become a writer and lecturer, and an inspiration to
all.
第四句：小结
这个例子清楚证明了无论面临何种任务，我们决不能高估困难或低
估自己的能力。
This case effectively illustrates that no matter what tasks we
are confronted with, we should never overestimate the
difficulties or underestimate our abilities. (216 words)
第二节
01 小作文：爱心信
02 大作文：人生哲理
CONTENTS
小作文：爱心信
PART ONE
小作文：2010-2021年英语（一）小作文大纲样题
Directions:
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering
financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the
department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and
how you will carry out your plan.
第一段：改写提纲一
尊敬的先生或女士：
希望工程这项高尚的事业感动了我，同时这项工程迄今所取得的成就也鼓舞了我。因此，
我想通过给贵省偏远地区的一个孩子提供经济帮助，来为希望工程贡献我的微薄之力。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Moved by the noble cause of Project Hope and encouraged by what has been achieved so
far, I would like to contribute my bit to the project by offering financial aid to a child in a
remote area of your province.
第二段：第一句：改写提纲二
如果您能帮助我找到一个刚开始上学但家庭无法为其负担学费的小女孩，我将不胜感激。
I would be very grateful if you could help me seek out a girl who has just started schooling but
whose family cannot afford her education.
第二段：第二句：改写提纲三
本人计划按年度支付她的学费直至她中学毕业。
My plan is to pay for her tuition on an annual basis until she finishes her secondary education.
第二段：第三句：改写提纲三
我希望把捐款直接汇给她的家人在当地开设的银行帐户中。
您真诚的，
李明
I would like to remit my donation directly to a bank account opened by her family in her local
area. (105 words) Yours truly, Li Ming
大作文：人生哲理
PART TWO
Directions:
Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an
essay in which you should
1、describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and
2、point out its implications in our life.
第一段：图画描述
第一句：上述这组图生动地描述了一朵鲜花在不同环境中的命运。
（总体描述）
The set of drawings above vividly depict the destiny of a
flower in different circumstances.
第二句：细节描述：图一
如第一幅漫画所示，这朵鲜花正在舒适的温室里充分绽放，温室使
它免于可怕的闪电和风雨的侵袭。
As is shown in the first cartoon, the flower is growing in full
bloom in a comfortable greenhouse that shelters it from the
threatening lightning and storm.
第三句：细节描述：图二
相反，当被搬出温室并暴露在风雨之中时，鲜花很快就凋谢枯萎了，
花瓣散落一地。
On the contrary, when removed from the greenhouse and
exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers,
with its petals scattered on the ground.
第二段：意义阐释
第一句：让步，否定表层含义：
首先，这组图的目的是告诉我们温室花朵经不起风雨，
To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us
that the flower growing in the greenhouse cannot withstand
the test of the storm.
第二句：承上启下，过渡句
然而我们应该认真看待它们所微妙传达的象征含义。
Yet the symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be taken
more seriously.
第三句：主题句（中心思想/象征寓意）
这朵娇弱的鲜花自然而然地会和年轻人联系起来，具体而言，就是
当代社会的独生子女。而温室是保护孩子免受风雨的父母溺爱和优
越物质条件的缩影，风雨就象征着严峻的现实。
The delicate flower is naturally associated with young
people—to be specific, the only child in our current society—
while the greenhouse epitomizes parents’ doting care and
abundant material supplies that can shield the children from
the storms, which symbolize the harsh reality.
第四句：小结：说明后果
一旦一直被宠爱的年轻人开始寻求独立并且接受来自现实世界的挑
战，人们发现他们已经被惯坏了，在困难面前无法足够坚强。
Once the young people who have been doted on begin to
seek independence and accept challenges from the real
world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in
the face of difficulties.
第三段：建议措施
第一句：主题句
总之，我们很有必要从这些发人深思的图画中得出积极的含义。
Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications
from these thought-provoking drawings.
第二句：建议一
一方面，我们可以用它们来帮助年轻人在生活中更加独立。
On the one hand, we can use them to aid the youth to be
more independent in life.
第三句：建议二
另一方面，父母们应该充满理智，给孩子们更多自由来解决困难和
问题。
On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to
give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and
problems.
第四句：小结
只有经历更多的挑战和磨练，年轻人才能培养强大的个性和能力，
而且只有这样在竞争激烈的社会中他们才能成为赢家。
Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity
can young people cultivate strong personalities and
abilities, and only in this way can they become winners in
this competitive world. (267 words)
第三节
01 小作文：邀请信
02 大作文：人生哲理
CONTENTS
小作文：邀请信
PART ONE
Directions:
Write an email to invite a famous professor to give a lecture to the
students who love English in your university.
第一段：自我介绍+写作目的
尊敬的亚历山大教授：
我谨代表北京外国语大学全体热爱英语的学生，诚挚地邀请您给我们做一场演讲。
Dear Professor Alexander,
On behalf of all the students at Beijing Foreign Studies University who
share a love for the English language, I cordially invite you to give a lecture to us.
第二段：第一句：邀请原因
由亍您是全丐界英语语言研究方面杰出的与家之一，我相信学生们丌仅能从您身上学到很
多知识，而丏也能够获得很大的启发。
As you are one of the outstanding experts in the English language all over the
world, I believe that the students will not only be able to learn from you, but to
be inspired by you as well.
第二段：第二句：时间地点
我们期待您能抽出时间在1月4日上午10点来我校做一场演讲。
We are hoping that you will be available for a lecture on our campus at 10：00
am on January 4.
第二段：第三句：具体安排
其中45分钟将是您的演讲时间，另外15分钟则是问答环节。
There will be 45 minutes allocated for your lecture and 15 minutes for a
question-and-answer session.
第三段：期待回信
如果您对此次来我校演讲感兴趣，可以通过以下的邮箱地址给我发电子邮件。我们期待不
您相见。
您真诚的，
李明
If you are interested in coming to our university for the lecture, you can email
me at the address below. We are looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
大作文：人生哲理
PART TWO
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In
your essay, you should
第一段：图画描述
第一句：这幅图画描述了一个强壮的人正在试图从一块巨石中找出黄金。（总体描
述）
The cartoon depicts a strong person trying to find gold
in a huge stone.
第二句：细节描述：
他用坚定的双手举着一把斧头，试图从绝望之石中开采出希望之金。
Holding an ax with his firm hands, he is hewing out of
the stone of despair a piece of precious gold.
（Martin Luther King: I Have a Dream 8/28/1963)
Hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope
从绝望之嶙劈出一块希望之石
Hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope and
you can make your life a splendid one.
新东方校训：从绝望中寻找希望，人生终将辉煌。
第三句：文字说明
文字说明显示：“创新才能发展，守业就是退步。
”
The caption indicates that “Only through innovation can
we make progress; conservatism means regression.”
第二段：意义阐释
第一句：主题句（中心思想，图画象征寓意）
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们应该充分重视创新。
The purpose of the drawing is to show us that utmost
importance should be attached to innovation and creativity.
第二句：分论点一
首先，创新的态度可以说是科学研究的信条。
To begin with, innovativeness could be said to be the
watchword, or motto of science.
第三句：举例论证
想想看，叧有在迚行了无数次的科学实验、实验测试和活体试验之
后，才能发明出一种新药物和新疫苗。
Think of all the innumerable times scientific
experiments must be carried out, all the laboratory tests, all
the live trials, before a new medicine or vaccine is discovered.
第四句：分论点二
其次，创新也是当今许多企业成功的原因。
In addition, many of today’s business successes can
be ascribed to innovation.
第五句：举例论证
例如，我本人曾在一家公司工作过。这家公司曾经尝试了四种丌同
的商业模式，历经四年才取得成功。后来这家企业的老总也成了最
大互联网公司之一的董事长。
For instance, at the company where I personally worked, it
was only after four years and four tries of different business
models that its entrepreneur finally succeeded, and became
the chairman of one of the largest Internet companies. (38
words)
第三段：归纳结论
第一句：结论句
总之，无论是在医学、工程还是商业的任何领域，似乎叧有重视创
新，才能获得最后的成功。
To sum up, in any field of endeavor, whether it is in
medicine, engineering or business, it seems necessary to
put great emphasis on innovation before one can finally
become successful. (31 words)
第二句：小结
在我们获得成功之前，生活好像是在考验我们，考验我们的创新能
力，看看我们是否能与注不自己的理想。
It is as if life is testing us, testing our innovation and
creativity to see if we are really dedicated to our ideals,
before life finally rewards us with success. （30 words)
第四节
01 小作文：推荐信
02 大作文：环境保护
CONTENTS
小作文：推荐信
PART ONE
Directions:
Write a letter to a friend of yours to
第一段：图画描述
第一句：正如图中巧妙地描绘的那样，两名游客正在一艘小船上观光，同时把野
餐的剩余垃圾随意丢入湖中。（总体描述）
As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, two tourists are sightseeing on a small
boat while discarding their picnic leftovers casually into a lake.
第二句：细节描述：
不幸的是，湖中已经堆满了漂浮的塑料盒、鱼骨、香蕉皮、西瓜皮、瓶子、罐头、食品
包装等各种垃圾。
Unfortunately, the lake is already filled with litter and teaming with flowing
rubbish like plastic containers, fish-bones, banana peels, watermelon rinds, bottles,
tins, food wrappings, and so on.
第三句：文字说明
在图画下方，有个小标题写着：旅程之“余”
。
And below the drawing, there is a caption which says: "after" the travel or "me"
in the travel.
第二段：意义阐释
第一句：主题句（中心思想，图画象征寓意）
从漫画中，我们可以得出结论，画家想要表达这样一种信息：成群的游客涌入众
多景点，制造并留下了大量的垃圾，破坏了自然之美。
From the portrayal, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a
message: a good many scenic spots are flooded with visitors, who spoil the beauty
of nature by creating and leaving behind God-knows-how-much trash.
第二句：正面论证
一方面，旅游业作为一项产值数十亿美元的产业，正在世界各地迅猛发展。
On the one hand, tourism, as a multibillion-dollar business, is booming
everywhere.
第三句：正面论证
有些人认为旅游业是经济发展的引擎，似乎忽视了其对环境的负
面影响。
Some people, under the belief that tourism serves as an engine of economic
growth, seem to ignore its negative effects on the environment.
第四句：正面论证
然而，我们必须充分关注这一问题。
Nevertheless, these are not concerns that we can shrug off lightly.
第五句：反面论证
另一方面，旅游业已经给我们生存的环境带来了巨大的压力：水
受到污染，生态平衡遭到破坏，自然资源被过度开发。
On the other hand, tourism has exerted great pressure on the environment
we are living in: our water is polluted, our ecological system is disturbed, and
our natural resources have been excessively used.
第三段：归纳结论
第一句：让步
毫无疑问，由于对那些几乎没有其他收入来源的地区而言，旅游业
确实有助于发展经济，因此任何国家都无法禁止旅游业。
Undoubtedly, tourism could not be banned in any country as it does help
to shore up the economy in places which have few sources of income.
第二句：结论句
但重要的是，旅游业毫无节制的发展可能使得经济发展不可持续。
However, the main point is that the unchecked growth of the travel business
may render the development of an economy unsustainable.
第三句：小结
是时候加强人们的意识，通过多加考虑环境保护因素来改变这一现
状了。
It is high time that we enhanced people's awareness to rectify this by
taking environmental protection into consideration.
表扬时间
PART THREE
对下列坚持完成5周范文背诵任务的直通车学员提出表扬
大咖A班
刘雨蓓
葛晨阳
封丁琰
杨万琦
陈秀智
马瑞祺
刘瑞涵
齐思雨
宋紫宁
张先龙
刘瑞涵
周睿鹏
杨江
张宇宁
郑晓玉
王旭坤
赵赢硕
李汶卓
吴子健
戴泽世
石丹
李瑶
赵显易
司祺
毕晓妍
夏园媛
王广苗
康尧
寒假班
郭一杰
李纪宁
王振红
吴鑫源
常丹丹
周睿思
郭芷泠
李心怡
倪金哲
王丹彤
王一涵
任旺
孙宁
李霞
马庆岚
崔晓荣
李茹茹
施沁宏
刘鑫
杨云飞
李悦彤
王学珍
张琪
春季班
王泽斌
郭英男
张诗茜
曹佳
尹炫琪
王雪婷
秦江源
李昂
王新月
简玉瑞
刘华泽
裴琳曼
李东格
惊蛰
高依凡
焦海威
易嘉平
田晗
张诗麒
周幸
钟志安
王家丽
陈丹阳
包靖萱
金玉婷
刘婧
夏季班
赵欣怡
李淦
霍一凡
王思宇
万亿
杨琳
杨雨婷
再接再厉！
下一阶段奖励：
坚持10周，可获得道长定制起床闹钟铃声！！！
（参与方式及统计规则详询班主任老师）
第五节
01 小作文：辞职信
02 大作文：传统文化
CONTENTS
小作文：辞职信
PART ONE
Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs
＆Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected.
You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him
your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on
ANSWER SHEET2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter;
use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10
points)
第一段：表示感谢
第一句：
尊敬的王先生：
十分感激您在过去的两个月聘用我为杂志《设计与时尚》的编辑。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very grateful to have been employed by you for the past two months
as an editor for your magazine Design & Fashions.
第二句：
我非常珍惜这个和您以及其他同事共事的机会。
I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here with you and my other
colleagues.
第三句：
这将是我一生中很难忘的经历。
The experiences I had here are ones I will not forget for my entire life.
第二段：第一句：改写提纲二
但是，对于一个喜欢计算机科学远多于时尚设计的年轻人来说，我发现目前的工作并不符合我的教
育背景与个人强项。
However, as a young man whose primary interest is in computer science rather than
fashion design, I have found that my present job doesn't fall in with my previous
training and strength.
第二句：改写提纲一（写作目的）
因此，我决定辞职，找一份与我的教育背景更加相关的工作。
I have therefore decided to quit this job to pursue other opportunities that may
conform better to my educational background.
第三段：改写提纲三
我为我的离职造成的不便深表歉意。
您真诚的，
李明
Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconveniences my leaving may cause.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
大作文：传统文化
PART TWO
Directions:
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay
entitled “Cultures---National and International”. In the essay
you should
1）describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and
2）give your comments on the phenomenon.
An American girl in traditional Chinese costume
第一段：图画描述
第一句：这幅图画生动描述了一位可爱的美国小女孩身穿传统的中
国服装，面带甜蜜的微笑。（总体描述）
The picture vividly depicts a lovely American girl in
traditional Chinese costume with a sweet smile on her face.
第二句：细节描述
她戴着具有某个中国少数民族服饰特色的发带、项链和其他装饰品。
She wears ribbons, necklaces and other accessories that are
characteristic of the clothes of a certain Chinese minority
group.
第三句：穿着效果
毫无疑问，这套服装为她美丽的外表增添了东方的魅力。
Undoubtedly, the costume has added oriental charm to her
beautiful features.
第二段：意义阐释
第一句：让步，否定表层含义：
这幅图画所表达的远远不只是一种新的时尚潮流。
What the picture conveys goes far beyond merely a new
fashion trend.
第二句：承上启下，过渡句
事实上，它还具有文化内涵。
In fact, it carries cultural implications as well.
第三句：主题句（中心思想/象征寓意）
神秘的中国文化吸引了各国人民这一事实表明，在某种程度上一种
文化可以在国际范围内被接受、尊重、欣赏和分享。
The fact that people from different countries are attracted to
mysterious Chinese culture indicates that to some extent a
culture can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared
internationally.
第四句：解释论证
换言之，一个民族独特的文化可以通过全球性的经济和文化交流走
向世界。
In other words, a nation’s unique culture can become
international through worldwide economic and cultural
exchange.
第五句：说明后果
由于全球化潮流不可阻挡，所以国家间日益频繁的文化交流可以有
效增进相互间的理解和友谊。
Since the trend of globalization has become irresistible,
increasing cultural exchange can effectively improve mutual
understanding and friendship between countries.
第三段：建议措施
第一句：建议一
在我看来，我们应该保存和珍惜作为无价精神财富的民族文化。
It is my view that national culture should be preserved and
cherished as a priceless spiritual treasure.
第二句：
同时，我们很有必要推广世界文化，因为来自其他文化的观点，即
使乍看起来相互矛盾甚至很荒谬，但从长远看来，可以为我们观察
这个世界提供一种不同的视角。
Meanwhile, there are good reasons to advocate for
internationalized culture, for those ideas from other cultures,
though controversial or even absurd at first sight, can in the
long run provide a different perspective for us to observe the
world.
第三句：建议二
然而，在我们面临不同文化时，应该充满理智地取其精华、去其糟
粕。
Nevertheless, when we are confronted with a different
culture, we should be sensible enough to absorb its virtues
and to resist its dark side.
第四句：小结
只有这样我们才能积极发展民族文化，并使我们的世界丰富多元、
多姿多彩、充满活力。
Only in this way can we promote cultural development
positively and make our world multidimensional, colorful
and vigorous.
第三节
01 小作文：邀请信
02 大作文：人生哲理
CONTENTS
小作文：邀请信
PART ONE
Directions:
Write an email to invite a famous professor to give a lecture to the
students who love English in your university.
第一段：自我介绍+写作目的
尊敬的亚历山大教授：
我谨代表北京外国语大学全体热爱英语的学生，诚挚地邀请您给我们做一场演讲。
Dear Professor Alexander,
On behalf of all the students at Beijing Foreign Studies University who
share a love for the English language, I cordially invite you to give a lecture to us.
第二段：第一句：邀请原因
由亍您是全丐界英语语言研究方面杰出的与家之一，我相信学生们丌仅能从您身上学到很
多知识，而丏也能够获得很大的启发。
As you are one of the outstanding experts in the English language all over the
world, I believe that the students will not only be able to learn from you, but to
be inspired by you as well.
第二段：第二句：时间地点
我们期待您能抽出时间在1月4日上午10点来我校做一场演讲。
We are hoping that you will be available for a lecture on our campus at 10：00
am on January 4.
第二段：第三句：具体安排
其中45分钟将是您的演讲时间，另外15分钟则是问答环节。
There will be 45 minutes allocated for your lecture and 15 minutes for a
question-and-answer session.
第三段：期待回信
如果您对此次来我校演讲感兴趣，可以通过以下的邮箱地址给我发电子邮件。我们期待不
您相见。
您真诚的，
李明
If you are interested in coming to our university for the lecture, you can email
me at the address below. We are looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
大作文：人生哲理
PART TWO
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In
your essay, you should
第一段：图画描述
第一句：这幅图画描述了一个强壮的人正在试图从一块巨石中找出黄金。（总体描
述）
The cartoon depicts a strong person trying to find gold
in a huge stone.
第二句：细节描述：
他用坚定的双手举着一把斧头，试图从绝望之石中开采出希望之金。
Holding an ax with his firm hands, he is hewing out of
the stone of despair a piece of precious gold.
（Martin Luther King: I Have a Dream 8/28/1963)
Hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope
从绝望之嶙劈出一块希望之石
Hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope and
you can make your life a splendid one.
新东方校训：从绝望中寻找希望，人生终将辉煌。
第三句：文字说明
文字说明显示：“创新才能发展，守业就是退步。
”
The caption indicates that “Only through innovation can
we make progress; conservatism means regression.”
第二段：意义阐释
第一句：主题句（中心思想，图画象征寓意）
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们应该充分重视创新。
The purpose of the drawing is to show us that utmost
importance should be attached to innovation and creativity.
第二句：分论点一
首先，创新的态度可以说是科学研究的信条。
To begin with, innovativeness could be said to be the
watchword, or motto of science.
第三句：举例论证
想想看，叧有在迚行了无数次的科学实验、实验测试和活体试验之
后，才能发明出一种新药物和新疫苗。
Think of all the innumerable times scientific
experiments must be carried out, all the laboratory tests, all
the live trials, before a new medicine or vaccine is discovered.
第四句：分论点二
其次，创新也是当今许多企业成功的原因。
In addition, many of today’s business successes can
be ascribed to innovation.
第五句：举例论证
例如，我本人曾在一家公司工作过。这家公司曾经尝试了四种丌同
的商业模式，历经四年才取得成功。后来这家企业的老总也成了最
大互联网公司之一的董事长。
For instance, at the company where I personally worked, it
was only after four years and four tries of different business
models that its entrepreneur finally succeeded, and became
the chairman of one of the largest Internet companies. (38
words)
第三段：归纳结论
第一句：结论句
总之，无论是在医学、工程还是商业的任何领域，似乎叧有重视创
新，才能获得最后的成功。
To sum up, in any field of endeavor, whether it is in
medicine, engineering or business, it seems necessary to
put great emphasis on innovation before one can finally
become successful. (31 words)
第二句：小结
在我们获得成功之前，生活好像是在考验我们，考验我们的创新能
力，看看我们是否能与注不自己的理想。
It is as if life is testing us, testing our innovation and
creativity to see if we are really dedicated to our ideals,
before life finally rewards us with success. （30 words)
第七节
01 小作文：投诉信
02 大作文：教育
CONTENTS
小作文：投诉信
PART ONE
Directions:
Write to the head of a train, and complain about its bad service.
第一段：第一句：自我介绍
尊敬的先生或女士：
作为贵列车的一位常客，我完全失望地发现贵方提供的服务远远不能令人满意。
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a regular passenger of your train, I am severely disappointed to find that the
service you have recently provided is far from satisfactory.
第二句：写作目的
因此，我写这封信希望引起您对这一问题的关注，能够很大程度地改进现状。
Therefore, I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the matter in the hope
that the present situation can be improved.
第二段：投诉原因
第1-2句：原因一
众所周知，准时对于铁路服务非常重要。然而，这趟列车经常晚点，给我带来很多的麻烦和不
便。
As we all know, punctuality is essential to the railway service. However, the train has
been delayed from time to time, which has brought me much trouble and
inconvenience.
第3-4句：原因二
更糟糕的是贵列车男女服务员糟糕的态度。他们的服务并未体现：“顾客就是上帝”
。
Even worse are the bad manners of your stewards and stewardesses. Their services
has not benefited from the saying, “The customers is king.”
第三段：建议措施
第1句：期待回信
我相信您会认真考虑这个问题，并尽快给出满意的答复。
I believe you will take this matter into serious consideration and give a satisfactory
reply as soon as possible.
第2-3句：写作目的
同时，我真诚地希望您能改善管理系统。我将很高兴看到贵方列车服务的改进。
您真诚的，
李明
At the same time, I sincerely hope that you will review your management system. I
would be glad to see improvements in your service.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
大作文：教育
PART TWO
Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you
should
1）interpret the chart, and
2）give your comments.
You should write about 150 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
(15 points)
1998-2004年全国工程硕士招生录取人数
（工程硕士：Master of Engineering）
第一段：图表描述
第一句：上述图表清楚地揭示了过去七年中国的工程硕士招生录取
人数急剧增长。（总体描述）
The diagram above clearly illustrates that a dramatic increase has
occurred in the recruitment of Master of Engineering (ME) in China during
the past seven years.
第二句：根据上面给出的数据，我们可以得出结论：从1998到2004
年，工程硕士招生录取人数稳步增长。（细节描述：时间+变化）
According to the statistics given above, we may conclude
that the recruitment of MEs was on a steady rise from 1998
to 2004.
第三至四句：1998年，招生人数较少，只有大约2500人。令人惊讶
的是，到2004年招生人数在不到七年的时间里达到3.5万人以上。
（细节描述：数据）
In 1998, the number was at a low of only about 2,500.
Surprisingly, it reached more than 35,000 in 2004, within no
more than seven years.
第二段：原因列举
第一句：主题句：
促成上述变化的一些主要原因可以概括如下。
Some driving factors that contribute to the abovementioned changes may be summarized as follows.
第二句：原因一
首先，中国在制造业方面变得异常活跃，这使得对高素质工程师的
需求增长。
First and foremost, China has become particularly active in
manufacturing, which has led to an increased demand of
qualified engineers.
第三句：原因二
此外，就业市场的总体发展无法跟上大学毕业生人数的增加，这促
使很多学生在校园里再呆三年时间，为就业做更好的准备。
In addition, the development of the job market on the whole cannot
keep pace with the expansion of college graduates, which has obliged a
large number of students to stay on campus for another three years to
get better prepared for their careers. (43 words)
第四句：原因三
最后，工作压力是另外一个原因。
Last but not least, working pressure is another reason.
第五句：小结（预测趋势）
考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以预计：随着社会的迅速发展，工程
硕士的招生人数在未来十年将会继续增加。
Taking all these factors into account, we may predict that
with the speedy development of our society, the
recruitment of MEs will keep growing in the forthcoming
decade.
第三段：建议措施：
第一句：让步
然而，问题的另一方面，这种趋势可能带来很多问题，例如人才的
浪费。
On the other side of the coin, however, this tendency may
bring about a good many problems, such as the waste of
talent.
第二句：结论句
我们必须采取有效的措施确保这一状况不会失控，同时鼓励学生选
择那些在就业市场上需要的既有理论知识又有实践技能的专业。
It is necessary for us to take effective measures to ensure this situation
doesn’t get out of hand, and encourage students to choose majors for
which both theoretical knowledge and practical skills will be demanded in
the job market. (252 words)
第八节
01 小作文：感谢信
02 大作文：健康
CONTENTS
小作文：感谢信
PART ONE
Directions:
After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by Mr.
Shakespeare. Write a special letter to express your thanks.
第一段：第一句：写作目的
尊敬的莎士比亚先生：
我写信是为了表达我衷心的感谢。
Dear Mr. Shakespeare,
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.
第二句：解释情况
我指的是那天我被一辆出租车从自行车上撞下来的不幸事件。
I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my
bike by a taxi.
第二段：感谢原因
第1句：
如果不是您及时帮我进行急救处理的话，恐怕后果会更严重。
If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the
consequences might have been very serious.
第2句：强调句
大家都认为，正是您在那个紧急事件中的机智反应才促成了这样令人满意的结果。
Everyone agrees that it is your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led
to this satisfactory outcome.
第三段：
第1句：让步
尽管现在越来越多的人谈论大公无私的必要性，但是我们看到很少有人言行一致。
Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish,
we see very few people practice what they preach.
第
2句：虚拟语气
如果有更多人像您一样的话
，世界会更加美好
。
您真诚的
，
李明
If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
大作文：健康
PART TWO
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.
In your essay, you should
1）describe the drawing briefly,
2）explain its intended meaning, and
3）give your comments.
第一段：图画描述
第一句：如图中象征性描述的那样，一位医生穿着白大褂，戴着听
诊器，手拿病历正在医院的一间病房里和他的病人交谈。（总体描
述）
As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, wearing a white gown
and a stethoscope, a doctor is holding a medical record and speaking to
his patient in a hospital ward.
第二句：显而易见，这幅漫画的内在含义是：人们现在的运动量越
来越少，这对于他们的健康而言并不是什么好消息。（象征寓意）
Apparently, the intended meaning of the drawing is that
people are doing less and less exercises now, which is not
good news for their health.
第二段：意义阐释
第一句：主题句：
保持健康的方式有很多种。
There are numerous ways of keeping fit.
第2-3句：分论点一
首先，最为有效的就是进行体育锻炼。人们各自选择慢跑、打篮球、
游泳、滑冰、爬山或骑车作为其日常锻炼，这是因为这些运动无一
不会使我们更强壮、更加精力充沛。
First and foremost, it is most effective to do physical exercises. People
variously choose jogging, playing basketball, swimming, skating,
climbing or riding as their regular exercises, because exercise never fail
to make us stronger and more energetic.
第4-5句：分论点二
此外，我们应该重视养成良好的习惯。均衡的饮食和充足的睡眠对
于生理健康而言都是不可或缺的。
Moreover, we should put great emphasis on forming good habits. A
balanced diet and sufficient sleep are both indispensable to physical
fitness.
第6-7句：分论点三
另外，心理健康也应该被认真对待。尤其在逆境中，我们需要保持
一种乐观的心态来经历人生的痛苦悲伤、迂回曲折。
What’s more, mental health should also be taken seriously.
Especially in adversity, we need to maintain an optimistic
mentality to pull through life’s pains and sorrows, twists
and turns.
第三段：建议措施
第1-2句：建议一
就我而言，我对瑜伽这种锻炼形式有特殊的兴趣。每天一小时的锻
炼经常使我感到更健康而且更有活力。
As far as I am concerned, I have a peculiar interest in yoga
as a form of exercise. An hour’s exercise every day usually
makes me feel healthier and more vigorous.
第3-4句：建议二
此外，我从不吸烟喝酒，也不熬夜。相反，我保持均衡饮食，而且
晚上11点之前上床睡觉，因为我相信熬夜对健康有害。
Besides, I never touch any cigarette or wine, nor do I stay up
late. Instead, I keep balanced diet and go to bed before 11
o’clock at night, because I believe burning the midnight oil
is harmful to health.
第5句：建议三
更为重要的是，对生活的乐观态度使我充满自信而且坚持不懈。
More importantly, an optimistic attitude toward life makes me
confident and persistent.
总而言之，所有这些努力可以保证我们拥有健康的体魄和快乐的生活。
To sum up, all these practices guarantee a healthy body and a happy life.